be honest with me im been think of a story and this is what i came up with so please give me your opinion

a couple who's been together and knows about each other so well.... the boy felt as if she was so important in his life that he loved her so much. The girl felt the same, but one day the boy broke up with her and left her crying in the park. She felt devastated and so did he. There was always this awkward thing going on between the two, and one day her friend wanted to ask him out. She couldn't bear that so she just said as a friend to do her best. Apparently the boy still has feelings for her and never accepted confessions from girls that are close to her. He didn't know that the girl's friend was... well her friend, so he accepted her confession without a second thought. She was yet again devastated and one day they were going out on a date and asked her to go with. Like a double date, she tried to refuse but couldn't because her friend was too... forceful. She agreed and met the at a restaurant that they were suppose to eat at. The boy brought his friend not knowing it was his ex. Once they were face to face, their friend's tried to get their attention. Even though the girl's friend knew that they dated, she tried to make her jealous.